Cupid sat on the clouds high above in the sky. With his bow and an arrow, each in one hand, his eyes hawked at a potential target. Unable to find one, Cupid ordered a small fluff of cloud to carry him down- close to the Earth so he could have a better view.
The cloud carried Cupid down to a land people called India. He smiled. He had higher chances of finding a target here given the high population counts. He began to observe. Not a long time later, he saw a boy- soft-eyed and happy. His walk was proof enough to tell Cupid he was confident and content in life; a man of carefree nature who needed love in his life.
But a counterpart was also to be found for him. Cupid scratched his chin. He looked far down the road. He was a God and could see a lot farther than mortal humans could. He saw a girl coming from the opposite direction of the road. The girl was as if she was exactly made for the boy. Cupid would be proud of these two as they would both find bliss in the love they would have for each other.
“A new love story is about to take shape. I will cherish the moment when they will lock their eyes for the first time and the smile that will play on their faces.”
With these thoughts pleasing Cupid’s mind, he assembled his arrow on the bow to take aim at the boy.
As the aim was almost taken, a sudden and loud honk broke Cupid’s concentration forcing him to clench his eyes shut. He opened them again raising the bow-arrow assembly towards the boy only to find the boy missing. Where he last stood, now was taken over by an over-excited crowd trying to get a glimpse of what lay in the centre. Curious, Cupid spread his wings. Ordering the cloud to stay at its place, he fluttered his wings and flew to the spot. He saw the boy lying in a pool of blood. Overhearing a man, he came to know of the uncontrolled over sped car that had hit him. The culprit, a teen who was barely over the legal age for driving, stood in the corner with his car. The furious mob ran towards him and the car. He looked terrified at his awaiting condition but was saved by an intervening patrolling cop.
“I will take care of him. Justice will be done. The law will punish him.”
Satisfied that the boy would now not be spared, the mob dispersed. The cop held the boy by his collar and dragged him away into a nearby lane. Cupid followed and watched them from a distance.
He saw them arguing over something. It was not clear from the distance and this situation was unfamiliar to him. Being a God did not help here. This was all he was witnessing for the first time and he did not have a clue of anything.
They finally seemed to have agreed on a mutual decision. The brat handed the cop five similar rectangular pieces of artistically decorated paper which had four digits and a picture of an old man printed on them. They shook hands and the brat disappeared into the lane. Justice had been served.
Confused and shocked, Cupid returned to his cloud. An ambulance had already arrived at the scene by the time Cupid returned. The girl, chosen by Cupid himself, who was supposed to fall in love with the warmth in the boy’s eyes, reached the spot. Her eyes fell on the boy sprawled on the stretcher and being loaded onto the ambulance van. She made a crinkled face.
“Oh my! What a poor thing. I hope he is not badly hurt and gets well soon, “she said in a worried tone to the friend accompanying her, without slowing her graceful pace down. She walked down the road and soon was out of sight, their talks having shifted to the latest arrived nail paint brand. The boy was already forgotten.
The commotion died away slowly. The ambulance was gone. A road sweeper swept the litter and the blood from the road into a nearby drain. Everything and everyone seemed as if nothing had happened. The only one who seemed to be affected by the incident was Cupid, the God of Love, who sat on his cloud, motionless; staring at the arrow he still had in his hand, wondering what to do next.
So good! unexpected and so good!
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Thanks Maureen! 🙂
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You are welcome! im glad to be following you! 🙂
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So am I. Take care! 🙂
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🙂 🙂 you too!
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That’s awesome 🙂
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Oh thank you so much Dhwani! 🙂
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Superbly written!
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Thanks Sucheta! 🙂
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A wonderful plot twist..seems so real. Sans the Cupid thing, which we can take as a euphemism of Destiny or Fate…the entire story has stark resemblance with recent happenings in this country. Kudos!
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Thank you so much Maniparna! You get what the story is all about and its resemblance to everything that our country is going through, my efforts have borne fruit. 😊 Thank you again!
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You are welcome… 🙂
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I have been thinking of word to describe the beauty of your writing but i have none. I am speechless.
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Thank you so much! I am so happy that you find my writing good enough. 😊
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Good enough ? Nope. Its epitome of perfection..!!
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Oh thanks! You’re too generous. 😊 But it isn’t perfect. Perfection eradicates the scope of improvement you know. 😉
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True that. But maybe sometimes we find somethings to be perfect despite all its imperfections. 🙂
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Wow! I really never thought that way before. Thanks! 😊
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Very well written. Loved your blog. Hope to read more soon. Keep it up 💕
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Thanks a ton. More will be up soon. Keep visiting! 😊
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I hope you know you have me hooked! ahhaa! i keep checking back to see if there is a part two to this story and i dont want to miss it in the reader! and would you mind if i shared this with my followers?
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Haha… I never planned a part two to this story. There are other stories and posts lined up. And I won’t mind you sharing it. In fact, I’d be happy! Thank you!😊
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aaahhh! i knew you were gona leave me hangin!! hahaha! but actually that is a great way to end it. You leave us wanting more and that is a sure sign of a talented writer!! i so look forward to your future posts thats for sure! 🙂
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Thank you so much! New posts will be up soon! 😊
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Yay!! hahaa looking forward to it! 🙂
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Me too! 😁
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Reblogged this on Sparkle and commented:
Oh this is a talented young man for certain! Can’t explain how this story made me feel but I liked it…a lot! You’ll just havta read it yourself and decide, if you can, how it makes you feel! Post your feelings! I would love to know! 🙂
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Thank you, Maureen!😊
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You are so welcome Swapnil! 🙂
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Powerfully written and SO India where corruption is rife. And am guessing Cupid didn’t have any rules or regulations about castes or religion?
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Thank you!
Well, I think Gods have more important jobs than thinking about castes and religion. But the social evils have plagued our country so badly that even Gods appear helpless before them.
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Wow
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That was beautifully woven story Swapnil!! poor Cupid!
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Thanks!
Yeah! Human deeds nowadays render Gods helpless!
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Totally!
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